Feli does a good job of sticking to the prompt and her analysis is good.
Matthew Patel (http://mpatelrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/):
Matt went right to work when presented with the prompt and not only wrote a lot but with purpose as well. He has great handwriting which is a plus for the AP readers. His writing is serious and intellectual as compared to his blog writing which is funny and entertaining.
Eddie Pineda (http://cwestrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/):
Eddie is getting the hang of it although the ten minutes wasn't sufficient because he would've written more if there was more time at hand. The sentences that he does have down are well written and well thought out.
Megan Hardisty (http://mhardistyrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/):
Well thought out introduction and I agree with Ming in that here second paragraph can be organized better. She did a good job of sticking to the prompt.
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